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  • One review of your MS Word-formatted essay 
  • Feedback in the form of suggestions using MS Word's Track Changes (examples below)
  • Expert suggestions based upon your essay advisor’s reaction to your writing
  • A 15-minute conference with your essay advisor to discuss the commentary

Will your application essay spotlight your personality and special characteristics? Will it shine and make you stand out from the crowd? 

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